雅思大作文怎么提高分数

发布时间:2022-05-12 14:36:58

雅思大作文怎么提高分数

1. 在雅思写作中使用同义词进行替换

使用雅思写作同义词的好处在于首先可以向考官展示考生词汇量的丰富,其次也可以使文章富有变化。因此,雅思写作同义词的运用是衡量雅思考生英语水平的一个很有力的标准,考官认同你的同时,自然也会给你高分。请看下面的例子:

School teachers used to be the source of information. However,some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because there is an increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion

2. 在雅思写作中使用各种形式的同根词进行替换

雅思写作里面有很多同根词,专家分析认为,通过雅思写作单词的变换来吸引阅卷者眼球并获得高分是一个很好的办法。一些单词通过添加前缀或者后缀的方式可以衍生出很多新的词汇。而使用这些雅思写作词汇可以避免重复原文当中的词条,也可以向阅卷者展示你变化词汇的技巧。

比如雅思写作中我们经常会用到“知道”这个概念,我们可以用know这个词以及它的其他形式和它们的同义词来表示“知道”这个意思。

3. 在雅思写作中使用短语进行替换

雅思写作中同样可以拥有丰富的短语,使用它们,可以准确传达原文中的信息。在一些特殊情况下,短语也可以作为增加字数的方法。以下我们来看另外一个例子:

Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Do you support or oppose this statement.

雅思写作备考句型

1. not at all =not in the slightest根本不

2. end up 【doing sth 】 结束【做某事】

3 .make a mistake/mistakes in sth在某方面出错

4 .later on随后

5. be afraid to do sth害怕做某事

be afraid of doing sth/sb害怕……

6. laugh at sb嘲笑某人

7. take notes=write down the notes做笔记

8 .make up组成

9 .deal with=do with处理

10. be angry with对……感到生气

11 .go by【时间】过去、消逝 Time goes by. 时间流逝

12. try one’s best to do sth尽某人大努力做某事

13 .break off突然终止;中断

14. make flashcards制作抽认卡

15. make a vocabulary list制作词汇表

16 .read aloud大声读 play the CD too loud把CD放开大声

17. practice doing sth练习做某事

18. get the pronunciation right =pronounce right发音准确

19 .specific advice/suggestions详细而精确的建议

20. memorize/recite the words背单词

21. read the textbook读课本

22 .English grammars英语语法

23 .feel differently觉的不同

24. frustrate sb = make sb frustrated使某人沮丧

find sth frustrating发现某事沮丧

25. get/be excited about激动 look excited看起来很激动

an exciting match/game一场刺激的比赛

26 .spoken/oral English英语口语

27 .regard... as把 …... 当成/看作

regard sth as a challenge把某事视为挑战

28. impress sb感动某人 be impressed被深深感动

be impressed by sb被某人感动;对...印象深刻

29.have trouble/difficulty【in】doing sth= have trouble/difficulty with sth做某事有困难

30. look up the words in a dictionary用字典查阅单词

雅思满分作文语言特点

1平行结构多

Although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that government should restrict or regulate these pursuits.

这句话考官用两个动词调节语气,词汇准确,而且修辞上头韵的效果,大家多收集意思相近的动词,动词的排列是很体现语言水平的。

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time

形容词+名词的排列,意思上表达全面,语感上佳。

The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests

名词的排列特别注意下意思的递进。逻辑全面性的体现。

2围绕中心词写出长修饰

In fact it would be fair to maintain that if extreme sports were banned, then why not ban any activity which could be interpreted as harmful such as smoking, drinking or even eating junk food?

大家一定要培养宾语的扩展能力,写出中心名词后,用定语从句进行修饰。这是英汉之间语言的大区别。英语是先给中心词,后面加上修饰。中文习惯定语放在名词的前面。文中中心词是activity,后面是拓展部分。

3谓语动词多样化处理

Rather than banning these sports, governments should ensure that companies who provide facilities for dangerous sports meet the required legal safety standards.

多个谓语动词处理有两种方式,一个是连接词衔接,动词原形排列,一个非谓语表达【to do/doing/done】体现多样性。但是,大家一定要注意非谓语的排列顺序会有逻辑效果,所以要格外严谨。

we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.

非谓语表达强调结果的逻辑。

4插入语多见

If, for example, an individual decided to go parachute jumping, then the authorities should insist that he or she undergo sufficient training and supervision and, if necessary, obtain the legally required license

插入语是有难度的手艺,需要有积累,位置摆的要有讲究。既要考虑语法,又要兼顾意思。需要长期练习。

5状语处理

介词是英语的灵魂,介词引导状语是考官的惯用手段。介词的搭配和位置是英语写作的重点难点,一个人对于介词的驾驭直接体现语言水平。状语可以丰富句意,意思上更加全面。这是语言严谨性,逻辑性的直接体现。主要是时间,地点,方式,条件,目的等等。

One problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.【伴随状语】

If there were easy-to

reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.【地点状语】

This has the added benefit the parents and children often use them together just for fun which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.【at时间状语细节展示】

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.【as引导原因状语】

6概念到具体的过程

The variety of spors that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

细节化的展示是雅思作文的特点。从抽象到具体,从概括到细节。大家要学会这种演绎法的思路。

Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local counsel has done.

怎样才能致胜雅思写作

阅读不是指在内容选择上面的泛泛而读,而是主攻贴近生活的实用性文章。阅读有诸多好处,能在字斟句酌的过程中扩宽思维,增强语感。同时,读的越多,脑子里面的材料库就被扩充的越丰富,临到我们要用的时候,信手拈来的材料会让我们写作少很多阻力。

一般情况下,我们上学时期的英语课堂阅读文章讲解,老师更多的是将眼光放到了重难点词汇讲解和语法分析上面,很少能从整体的文章行文结构入手。这样,同学们掌握的就是片面的关节知识,不知道怎么将这些关节合理有序的连接到一起。因此上海市雅思培训机构的老师认为应该在阅读的过程中触类旁通,多分析行文结构,在例文的阅读中吸取精华之处。

除此之外,阅读生活类的文章,要注意其中的一些特色词汇及句子,很多时候我们的作文分数不高就是因为连简单的词都翻译不来。划出那也专业性名词词汇及词组,以及典型语句,再加以背诵练习,相信雅思写作业难不倒同学们的。

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