雅思小作文怎么描述

雅思小作文怎么描述

雅思小作文除了第一句话复述题目外，接下来要写的就是overview了，也就是对图表的最明显的，有概括性的特征的描述。

首先，overview应该从三个角度展开：

1. overall trend整体趋势

2. biggest rise/ fall/ change最大变化项目

3. comparison对比

其次，overview具体内容应该这样写：

1. 写1-2个总体的特征

2. 不用带具体数值

3. 对比和最大值，或整体趋势往往需要结合起来写

3. 可以加一些功能性语言：总体看来overall; 最明显的是… It is obvious that…等

最后，咱们结合例子来看是如何体现的：

1. 找最大值

The British were the biggest spenders in all six categories among the nations compared in the bar chart while the lowest spending levels were attributed to the residents of Belgium

2. 总体数量比较

Overall, there were more male research students than females in 2005.

3. 总体趋势比较

Overall, the consumption of margarine and butter decreased over period given while for low fat and reduced spreads, it rose.

4. 总体占比对比+总体趋势变化

It is clear that Yemen had the younger population in the year 2000, and the same is predicted for the year 2050. The populations of both countries are predicted to get older over the 50 year period.

5. 变化性对比

As is seen from the given illustration, men were well ahead of women in all the job sectors in Freedonia in 1975. However the scenario changed in the 1995 and women did a remarkable progress in their professions.

6. 最大值最小值对比

The television was the most popular consumer durable while dishwasher was the least common type of durables the British people had during the years 1972 to 1983.

7. 最大值+总量对比

Revenue Sources and Expenditures of a USA Charity in one year.

Overall, it can be seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the income, while program services accounted for the most expenditure. Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings.

8. 总体趋势+对比+最大值

Overall, there was an increase in the number of visits to and from the UK and there were more visits abroad by UK residents than visits to the UK by overseas residents over the period given. Furthermore, the most popular country to visit by UK residents was France in 1999.

雅思写作中复合句怎么准确使用

一、 复合句的种类

英语的复合句一般分为三大类型：名词性从句、形容词性从句和副词性从句。

【一】 名词性从句

在整个复合句中起名词作用，充当主语、宾语、表语和同位语等的各种从句，统称为名词性从句。名词性从句主要有以下几种：

1. that引导的从句 e.g. It is reported that one third of Guangzhou citizens plan to buy a private car. 【据报道，三分之一的广州市民打算购买私家车。】

2. whether/if引导的从句 e.g. Whether motorcycles should be banned in Guangzhou has become an issue of controversy.【广州是否禁摩托车成了有争议的话题。】

3. how/why/when/where引导的从句 e.g. This essay aims to explore why so many white collar workers suffer from insomnia. 【本文将探讨为什么这么多白领失眠的原因。】

4. who/whom/whose/what/which引导的从句 e.g. Who should be responsible for the environmental degradation is still unknown.【谁对环境恶化负责还不清楚。】

【二】 形容词性从句

具有形容词功能，在复合句中做定语的从句被称之为形容词性从句或定语从句。被修饰的名词、词组或代词被称为先行词。形容词性从句分为两种类型：

【1】由关系代词 who, whom, whose, that, which, as引导的从句。 例如: People who are strongly against human cloning claim that it is immoral and unethical. 【强烈反对克隆人的人们认为这样做不道德和不合伦理】

雅思写作常见的语法错误

一、不一致

所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。比如：When one have money, he can do what he want to.

分析：one是第三人称单数，因此本句的have应改为has; want应改为wants, 本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为：When one has money, he can do what he wants 【to do】.

二、修饰语错位

英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点考生们往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解。比如：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.

分析：better位置不当，应置于句末。

三、句子不完整

在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常在主句写完以后，作者又想加些补充说明时发生。比如：There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.

分析：本句后半部分"For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。

改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.

四、悬垂修饰语

所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。比如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中"at the age of ten"只写出十岁时，但没有说明“谁”十岁时，按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改得明确一点，读者或考官在读句子时就不会误解了。

改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died.

五、词性误用

“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。比如：None can negative the importance of money.

分析：negative系形容词，误作动词。

改为：None can deny the importance of money.

雅思写作用到的积极词汇有哪些

give students/ citizens motivation to…给学生/公民动力去……

narrow the gap between the wealthy and the impoverished减少贫富差距

curb crimes控制犯罪

allocate money to投资于…

promote the development of… 促进…的发展

It is obvious that…显而易见，…

play a key role in起关键作用

enhance the efficiency of…提高效率

enrich one’s experience …丰富某人的经验

keep society safe and stable保持社会稳定

have an obligation to do …有责任去…

雅思写作用到的积极词汇词组结构

afford people entertainment and pleasure给人们提供娱乐

create employment opportunities创造就业机会

put something in the first place = give priority to… 把…当成首要任务

is less time-consuming and more economical省钱又省时间

broaden one’s horizons开阔人的眼界

contribute to … 为…作贡献

fulfill one's potential发挥......的潜力