托福作文怎么写

? 从杭州到北京，高铁比飞机好。

此题有以下3种可能写法：

【A】高铁好，准点、方便、舒服。

【B】高铁好，准点、方便、舒服，而飞机很有可能晚点，来往机场时间长，座位狭小，久坐不舒服。

【C】诚然，飞机时间更短【高铁耗时长】;但是，高铁好，准点【飞机很有可能晚点】、方便【来往机场时间长】、舒服【飞机座位狭小，久坐不舒服】。

首先，A这种写法没有对比，只是列举了高铁好，而并没有说明为什么高铁比飞机好。这是很多考生写对比型题目常犯的错误。B这种写法有对比，但是重复，即高铁的优点就是飞机的缺点。可取的是C这种写法，列举各自支持的理由，哪边理由更多更充分就支持哪边;而在一个段落内部，还可以对比。

托福作文怎么写？下面再看一篇高分学生考前练习作文。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.

【注：此文已更正语言错误，原文请见附录】

Nowadays, a lot of young people are having troubled minds of balancing job and social activities reasonably. From my perspective, I would say that one should spend more time on job which ensures a happier life than social life does.

Admittedly, social life forms an indispensable part of our life because spending time to gather with family and friends enables us to get a closer relationship with them. Naturally, it would bring us an ineffable sense of happiness.

However, the salary a decent job can offer seems to be more appealing to some people since it represents higher living condition and better material life which is obvious to see. For people who are similar to my elder sister, they seem to be more satisfied with a rich and abundant life. My elder sister Maggie is a life insurance actuary working in a big insurance company which is located in Northern Canada. As a qualified actuary with seven-year long working experience, Sister Maggie receives lots of money as the results of her hard work. And consequently, high salary from work enables her to live a prosperous life—Besides possessing two adjoining villas which are located in the centre of Toronto, she could also easily afford to pay the expense of sending her two children to best private schools and she would go to The Queen's Quay shopping mall every weekend to buy all sorts of luxury items. As for her, joyfulness coming from doing whatever she likes and being able to buy anything she wishes can not be replaced by any social gatherings.

Moreover, while people are working on their jobs, contributions they make to the whole society embody a sense of self-accomplishment. Teachers often find themselves working with a delightful mood and having accomplishment since they help kids to move ahead triumphantly. By praising a student who came up with an excellent answer in the class, teachers can make students feel confident, and consequently it is indeed a pleasure for teachers themselves as well. And after teachers impart knowledge, students learn and get a better understanding of all kinds of knowledge; teachers enjoy a satisfactory career life. So jobs make it a lot more possible for people to gain satisfaction with themselves compared with busying themselves doing social activities.

In general, the self-accomplishment and a rich and affluent life which job offers can be more significant in the process of pursuing well-being.

在分析这篇文章的时候，我们也把文章中的段首句抽出来。

However, the salary a decent job can offer seems to be more appealing to some people since it represents higher living condition and better material life which is obvious to see.

Moreover, while people are working on their jobs, contributions they make to the whole society embody a sense of self-accomplishment.

同样，这两句话也起到提纲挈领的作用。

关于这篇文章，大家也还有几个疑问。首先，让步段这么短，可以吗?这篇文章哪里体现对比?这篇的让步段很短，没有展开，但是起到了和后面两个段落对比的作用。而且在文章第三、四段末尾，也有对比。所以段落间有对比，而段落内部也有对比。

Maggie的例子是真实的么?一眼就能看出，Maggie的例子是假的。文章中提到公司所在地Northern Canada和居住地Toronto是矛盾的，而且Northern Canada位于北极圈内的不毛之地，应该改为Southern Canada。这一点考官能看出来么?如果用人来看，一扫而过，还真不一定看得出来;如果是机器来看，应该不会判断。注意，这个例子虽然是假的，但是写得非常具体，可以借鉴。